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Revenge, so clearly now, is
a pleasing shade of red.
I remove my hand 
and 
cloak my head
under gathering darkness.

A
Drop
Of my
Blood 
Falls 
To the
Ground.


I watched your downward fall
and now turn my face,
heart beating fast
as
I stride away,
not touched at all.

Breaks
The soil
Never to
Be found.


Your eyes told many secrets,
I knew them well.
Black letters
were
written as you fell
into fathomless depths.

A single
Drop not
More nor
Less, yet 
Still in
Time and
No regret.


There will be no funeral
nor eternal rest
for this cold
soul.
Time's belabored guest
to linger always after all.

Open
Wide
The 
Heart.

A sort of mash-up with ~SebastianGrimm's amazing piece, The knife. His words are in italics, mine are normal. I envisioned two characters here: a (righteous?) vigilante type, who carries out the assassination, and the individual who is killed.

Edit: 11/22/2013 Made the format more uniform, and added/changed a few words.
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L-Inque Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   Writer
Awsome!
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Thank you! :)
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vampiresballad Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
wonderful^^
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Thank you. :)
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vampiresballad Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
you're welcome^^
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13th-ZodiaK Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It was interesting :) I didn't quite get the two-characters thing, though. Idk, the italics bit didn't really seem like a victim's thoughts, more like... third-person omniscient, I guess? :shrug:
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
:XD: That's okay. I just came up with the idea as I was reading and ran with it. It wasn't even necessarily something I needed to mention in the description, but you know how you it is when you get those...uh...goosebump-inducing visuals, I guess? :lol: 
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13th-ZodiaK Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mm, I know just how you feel Cat nods
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
:D :iconbestbuddiesplz:
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InDecentSeas Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Morbidly lovely.
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